traeh ym
i’ve been holding on to it too tightly
far too long i’ve hidden it where no one can see
no one can hurt it if i keep it safe
but why do you keep on trying to reach for it?
you are making it hard for me
i may not keep my grip
will you take care of it as i have?
is it safe with you as it was with me?
you make me weak
tears?..why are there tears bluring my vision?
am i sad?
i don’t know..
am i happy?
…maybe
why do i feel like choking?
what is it?
love?
is this love?
your love?
am i ready to let it free?
to give it to you?
it has never been hurt nor have functioned as it was meant to
is it ready now?
unsure
uncertain
doubts still engulf my thoughts
i’ll loosen the chains
but will not let go
till i know
that you are the one.
ganito na kalala ang sitwasyon.. above were random thoughts.. i typed them as they came. . .. hmm.. i wonder what will become of this whatever you call it part of every person’s life…
haaaay elmo .. puso mo naka scotch tape lang yan…
November 27th, 2007 at 10:58 pm
Ano ka ba?! Ganda ng poem mo ah..impressive!!!nakakagulat!!!Yan ba ang nagagawa ng in Love na?!
Girl baka ganyan na din nararamdaman ko ngayon..
Kaya ako nagpapakatanga ngayon nu..
Intindihin nyo nalang ako…
November 28th, 2007 at 12:23 am
hahaha me? in love? that would be a first.. if ever it is love.
scary mehn.. sigh.. college has taught me to be emotional. that is a scary thing.
November 29th, 2007 at 4:19 am
i agree with rome’s comment..your random thoughts is so..so…impressive.
hindi gaya nung pinagawa tayo ni ma’am childa ng poem for rizal..(tapos 15 minutes lang iyon..X( )
isang linya lang ang masasabi ko sa iyo…
Change is inevitable
+++
“Unsure and Uncertain..”
nothing is certain in this world my dear. We have to take risk in every choice that we make.
November 29th, 2007 at 4:21 am
sorry for the wrong grammar..;)
November 29th, 2007 at 5:32 am
thank you, ganyan talaga pag nasa condition magsulat.. college has taught me to be emotional.
ung kay mam chichi namn na poem na pinagawa kanina eh crap na tlga un kasi wala sa condition mag sulat. u can’t force art you know. huwat? hehe
but going back to my “predicament” ..you can’t stop change, but you may take a different path. nasasayo yan… ay .. nasasakin pala yun.
November 30th, 2007 at 9:37 pm
don’tb worry..nakakarelate din naman ako sa iyo XD
November 30th, 2007 at 11:12 pm
…owkie lng yan..
natural lng na maramdaman ..
masasabi q lng is..
wag pigilan ang puso magmahal..
dahil pagpinigilan lalo lng maiipon at masasaktan..
kei,,, ..
wag matakot…
enjoy mo lng
December 4th, 2007 at 9:43 pm
nakanaks.
“Enjoy mo lang..”
-tignan mo si fiel. Super enjoy sa buhay niya..whaha
December 5th, 2007 at 2:08 am
romance and love are two different things. two very different things… they can happen at the same time.. but for that..you have to be sure… if he is the one.